Jurassic World Evaluation
21:18Evaluation
This is our story line :
These are the comment from other group who watched our trailer:
Cast:
-Pooh : Owen (Main character) - Can control the raptors
-Saranya : Claire (Main character) - Jurassic world owner
-Earn : Zach (The older brother)
-Gigi(extra) : Grey (The younger brother)
-Nano (extra) : the scientist
-Gam&Nano (extra) : The worker
Plot : After twenty years a new theme park is opened. Zach and Gray were sent to visit their aunt, Claire. By that time Claire have invented a new dinosaur which is called "Indominus Rex", Which is a genetically modified dinosaur. When the Indominus Rex escape from the cage, it is the same time when Zach and Gray sneak out to explore and ignore the warning or the evacuation order. So this leads to a fight between Indominus Rex and other dinosaurs because before the Indominus rex appear there is a bond between Owen and raptors.
This is our clip:
These are some shots from the trailer :
These are the comment from other group who watched our trailer:
These are the comment from others group,
Good comments : Some says that our film is funny so I think that we did well on that because we manage to make it comedy like what we are thinking to do, also it has good sound effect and also good acting.
Improvement comments : Our camera work is too simple as we didn't really move the camera ( too stable) and also the sound is too low so some people might not hear what the character is saying. But most of all many people said that it is not realistic so now we know what to improve if we have to do it again.
For me, what I like about my film is that we brought in so many props(mini dinosaurs, big dinosaur, wig, heels) and we use them to make our trailer more comedy which many people think that it is funny so I think we did well on that. I also like how we collaborate because no one got left behind doing all the work as we give out each person a role and we all helped out with the film. what is don't really like about our film is that the editing, i admit that we didn't get it finished on time and most of our scene (translation) got cut and changed to another scene so I don't think it is a good translation between each scene.
If I get to this task again I would improve on our editing, I would help shir edit because editing is very hard and shir is doing most of it without any help. So I think if we help each other more on editing, or give more ideas on how to edit we would have a better result at the end.
Cast:
-Pooh : Owen (Main character) - Can control the raptors
-Saranya : Claire (Main character) - Jurassic world owner
-Earn : Zach (The older brother)
-Gigi(extra) : Grey (The younger brother)
-Nano (extra) : the scientist
-Gam&Nano (extra) : The worker
1 comments
Earn - theres's some great presentation on this blog. The description of the roles, the use of images and gifs are all great.
ReplyDeleteTo improve this what would be great is some reflection on the process: what happened - how you feel about it - what you've learned - what you would next time.
Back this up with specific examples and you have a good start to your blog.